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Scars
- a Poem
- by Crystal David John
She sat by the rubble of her broken home,
Her tear-filled eyes stared at the torn rag doll –
The doll she had made with rags for her doll,
Whose head was smashed by the falling missiles.
Or was it a brick that was used by the ones,
Who worship in another way, eat different food,
Or dress differently and love a different colour?
Did differences do this to my smashed doll,
And to the doll’s doll?
She looked for a pen below the
Broken glass – searched for paper but
Found none.
Using the broken glass – she etched the word
‘Different dolls’
On her skin –
She felt no pain – as greater pain lay before her.
New scars – yes, to remember the old ones
Scars which cannot be forgotten
And shouldn’t be, by the mute spectators.
Scars that should never have been etched
On skin, or in the memories of the innocent.
47 thoughts on “Scars”
Very poignant to pen such thoughts coinciding with International Peace Day.
Thanks a ton
Beautiful ma’am very thoughtful l, we truly leave no stone unturned in our ruins
Thank you so much. Yes very true
Interesting!
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Mam….It’s a wonderful poem, which has a very deep meaning💫🌟
Love it – beautifully written
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That’s a great expression of grief.. Hats off to you dear Crystal mam..
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Wow!!
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Deep thoughts penned so beautifully.
I come from a time when differences were not even noticed. Then they were noticed but celebrated. But these days we witness scars/tears/pain because of the self same differences. Sad times that we live in.
Thanks – yes conditions are really getting to be awful. Many r so blind or deliberately blind
Very touching….very real.
Beautiful writing and nice poem.
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Wow! so much depth,thoughtful and beautiful work.Hats off to you Ma’am.
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Crystal, every word has gone through your Emotional Box(❤️) before being penned down therefore gives a stimulus to one’s thinking towards the dark side of the Divided World that we’ve built for ourselves.
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So beautifully written. Doll’s doll feels the pain of harsh differences.
True, sad, yet authentic u have been Crystal.
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Just lovely. I urge everyone to read it once and you’ll never regret. Awesome. Keep it up
Thanks Daniel
Excellent and lovely. Scars in memory cannot be seen and forgettable but as you said new scars are greater than the old. Very nice and so meaningful Crystal. May the Lord bless you abundantly.
Ty dear Dorathy ❤️
So very poignant and touching. I was very moved by the theme and images.
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Wow, beautifully composed 🙏🏽
Hard hitting!
Reality exposed of the callousness of all humans !!
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The poem poignantly captures the trauma of a world torn as under by differences. Sure to leave a scar in every reader.
Crystal’s poems are always loaded with meaning
Thanks a lot. You always read my poems I know ❤️
Very poignant with a deeper feeling…..
The poem is so hauntingly beautiful ma’am.
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Thanks Swati.
Beautifully penned ma’am. ❤️ It.
Very well written, Crystal!
Thank you so much Rennet
Very touching poem ma’am.. great work…❤️❤️
Thanks Anna
Profound. Tugs at your heartstrings.
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Amazing 🙂
Very good and thought provoking Crystal.