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The Girl
- a Short Story
- by Taraa Vermaa Senguptaa
The big city was not as much fun as she thought it would be. She missed waking up to birdsongs, walking up misty hills and under leafy arches covering winding roads.
“You’ll be fine” grunted the uncle.
“You’ll make new friends in school” said the aunt.
The boys made fun of her gawky frame. The girls pulled her oily plaits. They did not understand her strong accent. She wasn’t fine. She didn’t make new friends. She didn’t smile but nobody noticed.
She was wary when she saw him outside the park, fearing yet another unpleasant encounter. But he came closer till his scrawny body almost touched her. Something in his liquid brown eyes made her lean closer.
He licked her face. She hugged his furry little body. And they fell in love the way only orphans can.
22 thoughts on “The Girl”
Fabulously captured Taraa… Felt every emotion, the dread in the encounter… Mind was racing, inevitably fearing the worst- great build up..
Keep writing!
Thank you so much Rati 🙂
I plan to keep writing.
A story is less than 150 words? You made it fabulously possible! Kudos!
The character came alive !! Brilliant piece of writing Taraa!
Thanks a ton for the boost Sush 😀
Loved it BF!
Thank you Bestest 🙂
Loved the way it ended ! U certainly had the mind racing ….
Thanks so much Vaishali 🙂
The story finally wrote itself!
Brilliant experience while reading. Need much more
Thanks a ton Saoli.
You will get more 😀
Loved it Taraa!
Thanks so so much Shukti 🙂
Brilliant! Love your style ?
Thanks so much Preeti, for making my day 😀
Well done…had my heart beating fast for the little one and then aha…she met the bestest.
Thanks much Padmaja 😀
You will understand this so well…
Brilliant writing… you certainly have a knack of painting a picture and engaging the mind of your readers! Loved it!
Thanks a million James 🙂
Beautiful flare for writing. Gripping story with a brilliant twist. Loved it.
Thank you for being so kind Kaushal 🙂
Loved both the stories Taraa. So evocative and intense in such few words.