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One Night, at 12
- a Short Story
- by Ashmita Srivastava
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In the dead of midnight, all I could hear was the hooting of a night owl. The dark clouds drifted rapidly across the sky. My feet felt jammed in the ice-cold winds, which pierced through my woolen overcoat. Suddenly, I saw a figure. Couldn’t make out what it was, as the dense fog barred clear vision. The figure was moving in my direction. My prescience told me to run but I couldn’t move.
Staggering, I somehow reached the large banyan tree and hid behind it.
Several minutes passed, I heard nothing, I peeped out and saw no one. I had just begun to heave a sigh of relief, when the blood-chilling, awful truth struck me.
There I sat under the tree, face to face with the figure.
It smiled and I fainted.
Ashmita Srivastava
from Lucknow, in Uttar Pradesh, India, is an enthusiastic learner, keen on exploring new and different ideas to bring out the best in herself. For this teenager, writing is an escape from the real world into her own utopia.
1 thought on “One Night, at 12”
Your story is really so great. It kept me on tenterhooks throughout and the suspense was amazing. Specially the ending was so good and shocking when the reader comes to the staggering realisation that things are wrong now. You should keep on writing and continue it because this was so amazing.